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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10395
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分68.5分
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

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My feelings in collegue English grammar learning There is no doubt that English grammar is a big problem for most of persons who need to learn English.However, it’s the first step to learn English well.If you want to learn English ,you have no choice .For me ,it’s a headache . There are many differences between used to and be used to especially in college English grammar. What the students find most difficult in English is its idiomatic usage .Unluckly I am trapped in it deeply. Passages and dialogues often contain elliptical sentences.I often confuse them.Therefore I can’t understand their meanings exactly .But when you are writing a passage ,you can’t use too many idiomatic usages.Because English grammar should be used to make a sentence formally .I’m not used to this contradiction.But evidently I can’t solve the contradiction.What I can do is that study it every day . With the development of the society,English becomes more and more important. Although I have passed the CET-4 examination,I’m allergic to learn English grammar .I make up my mind sticking to learning English well .

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