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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8972
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分68.0分
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全文结构较为严谨;作者在高级词汇方面要多下功夫,有些单词拼错了;能够使用一些不错的从句。

用户练习作文:

People tend to judge a person by their appearance and nowdays the one who looks beautiful or handsome and dress fancy always get more attention. I have to say, I hate it from the botton of my heart. firstly, judging people by their appearance shows that you are a very supperficial person. the wiser man always to find the good sides though someone's appearance. the people with poor appearance often shows self-abasement. the situation even worse when facing by people's judgement all the time. Second, it seems people would take a lot of money and energy to change their apperance even it beyond their ability, which is a sick phenomena in our society. there is a new, a girl who threats her father that she will commit suicide if he father didn't support her to do the plastic surgery. finally her father didn't have choice but plan to sell his kidney to save the money for her beloved daugter. in a word, we should advocate a healty concept to judge a person. not only to their appearance, but from their heart.

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