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衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；简单句稍微有点多，可适当增加从句使用；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。
There is a saying that it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket, which means that we should seperate the risk when it comes to investment or other stuffs. why I agree with this opinion, my arguement as below: First, this saying could tech you how to avoice risk when you deal with your stuffs. For example, you will face to lose all your money when you invest it to one stock. it would be smarter if you scatter it to various stock. thinking the worse when you face the best avoices disadvantage, then you would ready it by coming up with some strategies. and you won't need to panic when it really comes. Second, giving up your stubborn when you have an exam. your teacher always warn you that don't waste your time on the item that you don't know how to do. But some students tend to struggle with the item and waste their time for getting nothing, in this way,they put all the eggs in a basket. in a word, to be a smatter one, you have to put your eggs in varous basket to reduce your risk.
