题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?
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1.对这种做法有人表示支持文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。
Should parents send their kids to art classes Nowadays, more and more parents tend to send their kids to art classes which raise a hot debate among people and they have different opinions toward it. For one hand, some of them think it is beneficial for children to develop their capabilities and confidence in art classes. It is believed that they will have a more bright and successful future once they take part in an art class. However, for another hand, some people against it because many kids are forced to attend art classes by their parents in which they show little interest and finally they can't keep on practicing and studying. Thus, it may give rise to a wasting of time and money because children will forget what they've learnt quickly. And most importantly, kids should have enough time to play with their friends in outdoor and that may be a better way for them to improve themselves. In my opinion, as the popular saying goes, every coin has two sides. I think parents should not send their kids to art classes until they find out their kids' real interest and hobbies. What's more, more time should be allowed to play with their friends. Only in this way can we give our children an effective and meaningful life.
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