衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;文中拼写错误比较多,用词也稍显贫乏;注意下文中出现的错误句子。
My name is Wangwenming,I have a good friend ,he name is Ouyangfeng.I often play beasktball with him .we always gone home of everyday .because he home and my home is nearst . One day,my friend Ouyangfeng don't go school,I'm afriad he things.therefor I leave school to see him.but he don't for home.since I disapport with him.