文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;句式偏短,建议加强复杂句的使用。
My name is Wangwenming,I have a good friend ,he name is Ouyangfeng.I often play basktball with him.we always go home of everyday .because he home and my home are nearly. One day,my friend Ouyangfeng don't go to school,I'm afraid he things.therefore I leave school to see him.but he don't for home.since I apart with him.