高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；采用了一些简单的从句；作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇，但请加强单词拼写的检查。

When time gose by,not only people have changed,but also have the place where we lived changed.last year I went to my home town but I found it was not familiar to me.Mang years ago,there are a lot of trees in my home town and the air is fresh.Well,the river is very clean so that we can see the fish swimming clearly.Now,as the dustray develops ,more and more problems appears.The traffic have been crowed and the polution get worse increasingly.