高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误。

When time gose by, not only people have changed, but also have the place where we lived changed. Last year I went to my home town but I found it was not familiar to me. Many years ago, there are a lot of trees in my home town and the air is fresh. Well, the river is very clean that we can see the fish swimming clearly. Now, as the dustray develops , more and more problems appear. The traffic have been crowded and the pollution get worse increasingly.