高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误。

When time gose by, not only people have changed, but also have the place where we lived changed. Last year I went to my home town but I found it was not familiar to me. Many years ago, there are a lot of trees in my home town and the air is fresh. Well, the river is very clean that we can see the fish clearly. Now, as the dustray develops , more and more problems appear. The traffic have been crowded and the pollution get worse increasingly.