作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章高级词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Reading selectively or extensively? What is your choice? Perhaps each of us has our choice. Some people think we should read selectively, for there are so many books for us to read. Thousands of new books are published every day. How can we cover all these books in our limited time? Besides, not all the books are worth reading. Some people, on the contrary, choose to read extensively. They think that reading extensively can broaden their horizons. Through reading extensively they can learn something about their ancestors; through reading extensively they can get the insight of great men. Reading extensively can also enable us to adapt to the rapid development of society. Because we are living in an era with exploding of information, if we don’t read extensively, we can’t get enough information about the modern world, and we can’t keep pace with the society. In my opinion, we should read both selectively and extensively. By reading extensively, we can enrich our knowledge of aspects. By reading selectively, we can focus on and acquire well the academic knowledge we will need in the future work.