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We just moved to a big house on the other side of town on Friday. I am very excited, because the house we are moving to is much bigger than the old house we lived in. There are 4 bedrooms in our new house, everybody has one bedroom, my sister and I don't need to share bedroom again. There are living room and bedrooms are on the upstairs. There is a kitchen and a dining room on the first floor. We have already choosen some new curtains for our new house. Almost everything in my bedroom is pink. Pillow and duvet cover are pink. Pink is my favorite colour. Next door to our house there is a public garden and a large sport and leisure complex. There is a market on the right of our house. Mum allows us to feed a dog because we have enough space. I can play table tennis after school is over. I love our new house