拼写做的很棒,高级词汇可适量增加;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨。
On the importance of a Name There is no denying the fact that, everyone has a name which was given by their parents or relatives. And once we think of a person, we mostly think of his name first. Thus, is it the name important in our daily life? Different people take different opinions toward it. For one hand, some of them show little concern about it and they think the name is not so important. Instead of having a good name, they prefer to be a useful and nice man which will prove themselves in action. While for another hand, many people have opposite views. They think the name is essential for normal life with which we can leave a good or bad impression to others that can make a contribution or a destruction to your work and communication. What's more, it may be more important for a star to help his fans remember him which will bring him a lot of benefits. Thus, in my opinion, as the popular saying goes, a good name will help you find out an easy way, we should pay more attention to our names. It should be easily remembered and written. Furthermore, it should be objective and positive which will impress others deeply. Only in this way can we find an easy way to have a bright and successful future.