2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Online shopping In the recent days,the Online shopping is becoming more and more fashionable,because it is convenient for young people to buy something such as books , food and so on while not leaving home .besides,the price of goods is lower than the price of shop. However,the Online shopping has also some disadvantages for people.For example,a number of people can`t use the computer so that they can not buy anything on the Online.In addition, some bussinessmen isn`t honest.they use the bad or fake items to cheat the customers so as to get more profits. In my opinion,on the one hand,the customers should improve the ability of distinguishing the items.On the other hand,the government should also strengthen the power of checking to ensure the safety.