江苏省无锡市前洲中学2011届九年级上学期期末考试作文：采访希望小学志愿老师有感

单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错。

One of the greatest teachers in No.four Middle school was reported.The English teacher's name is Lifang who is from Nanjing province.She has been here for five years.The students are always requested to pay close attention in class in her different reminders,however,students never complain it,at the same time,they appreciate the teacher who makes them love the interesting English class.In order to make the class do more special,she usually does some patterns on the curtains.Before the class begins,she hung them on the wall and pretended that it was painted by a little child.One time,the pictures on the wall had had trouble and had caused bad effect.Since them,it was rare things she had ever met.As she was a girl she dreamt of becoming a good volunteer and now her dream has come true.To suppose the Project Hope,she went to the poor district to help children learn English.It was her the biggest wish and now she has completed it.She was sympathetic about the children what she saw.Her honesty is very attactive.Once,she wrapped up her handbag to travel.The temptation to go out is very popular at that time.It contained her all articles,finally,it simply was a dream.In a few years,she changed her dream and she doesn't struggle up anything.She never regretted a desicion what she made.