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2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:58浏览次数:7190
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题目要求:

Today,the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?

题目讲解:

报告类题目,难度不大,思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。

第一段:开头

第二段:原因——环境污染,健康问题,工作压力

第三段:解决——绿色科技+绿化,健康意识+运动设施,学会自我减压

第四段:结尾

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文章层次较为清晰;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;文中词汇表达较为多样,但请认真检查词汇的拼写。

用户练习作文:

In the big city,the quality of our life is becoming lower.we always don't know when it begin,but it trouble with us deeply now. With the population increasing,enviroment pollution heathy and work pressure direct interrupt our life.More people mean that we need more resourses,so the cost on gas and mine is improving and enviroment pollution becomes serious.At the same time,we need more money to do heathy care for the new baby in case of pathgen.Furthermore,In the big city is not easy to earn money.Our work are always heave and fulfilling with competion.It is a pressure to make us improve .If we stay at the same position,we will get fired. Enviornment pollution has became headache to us for a long time.Now, the useful way to deal with that is developing a new technology to find no pullution resourse,but it's still a difficult that need us to overcome.I believe the best way to have heathy is playing sport. Playing ball can give you a strong body and get away from sickness.In our life ,we need to learn how to avoid trap by jealous.Keep quiet and calm make us happy. If we live in the big city ,sometimes it mean unlucky ,but we can't refuse it .so let us enjoy it.

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