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To know more about China Spaceflight,the meeting will be hold in our school.The topic is "China Spaceflight".You will be known how the astronauts train and why they succeed.How do they creat the new record and keep the boby strong.They often must suffer from bitterly sunshine and train their body continutally.It's not very easy to become following astrinaut.The man fix heaven in tight clothing.