2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；作者词汇表达不够多样，希望能多使用高级词汇。

If my foreign friend is going to visit my hometown,the most interesting place I would like to take him\her to see is the Great Wall.There are three reasons as follows. Firstly,everybody knows the Great Wall is one of the Eight Wonders of the World.Secondly,the Great Wall displays how smart the ancient Chinese were.There is a saying goes in China:The man who hasn't visit the Great Wall isn't a good man.The last but not the least,climb the Great Wall is very hard,we not only visit the wonder but also do exercise . These are the reasons why I take my foreign friend to see the Great Wall.