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If my foreign friend is going to visit my hometown,the most interesting place I would like to take him or her to see is the Great Wall. There are three reasons as follows. Firstly,everybody knows the Great Wall is one of the Eight Wonders of the World. Secondly,the Great Wall displays how smart the ancient Chinese were. There is a proverb saying in China:The man who hasn't visit the Great Wall isn't a good man. Last but not least,climbing the Great Wall is very hard,we not only visit the wonder but also do exercise . These are the reasons why I take my foreign friend to see the Great Wall.
