希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;层次不够清晰,文中很少使用衔接词。
I received your letter yesterday,I'm very glad that you will come to my hometown for this summer. I find some information about household hotel. The single room cost 30 yuan per day, the double room cost 20 yuan for one person.And the table money cost 20 yuan for one person. The price include all choices . You can eat with the landlord, and they can offer the menu, or you can cook by yourself.