Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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It is said clearly as the picture that the unemployment rate is increase with the less education.Such as the doctoral degree can earn 1551 median weekly,it's unemployment rate is 2.5;professional degree earn 1665 pancentage week,but unemployment rate is 2,4;with the master's degree is 1263 income,unemploment rate is 3.6;bachelor's degree is less than master's degree and so on.On the contract,less than high school diploma has highy unemploment rate which has 14.1,it's income only 451.It's contractly. In fact,it's trues that less than high school diploma has less compsition than highiy education,more and more company chools degree than less high school.With high degree means much konwledge,it's can use less time to acpatable now works. In the end,with the acpatable people said:you get high degree,you can side a highiy set to get more high income.