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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46206
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;句式灵活多变,再加强从句的使用会更棒;文中词汇表达不够丰富,且有较多拼写错误。

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It is said clearly as the picture that the unemployment rate is increase with the less education.Such as the doctoral degree can earn 1551 median weekly,it's unemployment rate is 2.5;professional degree earn 1665 pancentage week,but unemployment rate is 2,4;with the master's degree is 1263 income,unemploment rate is 3.6;bachelor's degree is less than master's degree and so on.On the contract,less than high school diploma has highy unemploment rate which has 14.1,it's income only 451.It's contractly. In fact,it's trues that less than high school diploma has less compsition than highiy education,more and more company chools degree than less high school.With high degree means much konwledge,it's can use less time to acpatable now works. In the end,with the acpatable people said:you get high degree,you can side a highiy set to get more high income.

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