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恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；作者高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多。
As we all know climate change lead to great effect for our life. Such as put off great number of greenhouse gases will result in global warming、sea level rise an so on bad effect. In the Climate Change Conference every country leaders will discuss how to protect our earth and what should every country to take measues to decress greenhouse gases emissions but how to contribution for the environmental protect. In the last many contries have some kinds of advice and consensus many contries leaders thinks this problem root is every country urgent develop they economy,in order to not lag behind other countys. so the discuss think some develop county should help the development county to devolopment of thier economy.what'smore the devolop county also should make measures reduce the pollution of the production.
