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恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；文中能较好的使用一些高级词汇，不过拼写错误比较多。
As we all know climate change lead to great effect for our life. Such as put off great number of greenhouse gases will result in global warming、Sea level rise and so on bad effect. In the Climate Change Conference every country leaders will discuss how to protect our earth and what should every country to take measues to decreass greenhouse gases emissions but how to contribution for the environmental protect. In the last many contries have some kinds of advice and consensus many contries leaders thinks this problem root is every country urgent develop they economy,in order to not lag behind other countys. so the discuss think some develop county should help the development county to devolopment of thier economy.what'smore the devolop county also should make measures reduce the pollution of the production.
