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2008年12月英语六级作文真题:提高心理健康

发布时间:2013-05-18 00:33浏览次数:1952
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题目 How to improve student's mental health
要求
1.学生心理健康的重要性
2.学校应该怎样做
3.学生自己应该怎样做
字数:150满分:100分
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拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。

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How to improve student's mental health With the development of society, student's mental health is becoming more and more significant which will have a great contribution to their happy and successful life. Once they stuck by mental problems, they can't focus on studying and have endless troubles. Thus, we must pay more attention to student's mental health and there are some measures following. For one hand, schools should set up some classes to help their students keep mental health. The classmate should be told what they should not do such as searching on unhealthy web-sites or cheating in exams. For another hand, student should develop the capability of displaying good judgement and resisting unhealthy thoughts by reading some useful books and watching some movies. What's more, they should keep a good role model in their mind which will give them a positive faith and push them to work hard and move on. In conclusion, both schools and students should give more awareness to improve student's mental health. Only in this way can students have a more bright and meaningful future.

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