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Nowdays,studing leifeng is becoming more and more popular .Different people have different opinions.so,some people think we should one expect a reward when doing a good deed.they think that we should arise the act from reward .but another people think that this act is very stupid .in my opinion,i think we should reward people.because they help ours.