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采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句。
As we all know climate change lead to great effect for our life. Such as put off great number of greenhouse gases will result in global warming、Sea level rise and so on bad effect. In the Climate Change Conference every head of stare will discuss how to protect our earth and what should every country to take measures to decrease greenhouse gases emissions but how to contribute for the environmental protect. At the last, many countries have some kinds of advice and many countries leaders think the problem root is every country urgent to develop they economy,in order to not lag behind other countries. So the result of the meeting thinks that some develop country should help the development county to development of their economy.what's more the develop county should also make measures reduce the pollution of the production.
