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As we all know climate change lead to great effect for our life. Such as put off great number of greenhouse gases will result in global warming sea level rise and so on bad effect. In the Climate Change Conference every head of stare will discuss how to protect our earth and what should every country to take measures to decrease greenhouse gases emissions but how to protect environment. At the last, many countries have some kinds of advice and many countries leaders think the problem root is every country urgent to develop they economy, in order to not lag behind other countries. So the result of the meeting thinks that some develop country should help the development county to development of their economy, what's more the develop county should also make measures to reduce the pollution of the production.
