作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,高级词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。
As is shown in the picture, the father asks his daughter how is school days. However, his daughter answers him to read all about it on her blog, instead of conmunicate with him. The picture noted that the internet has a great impart on our life and the way we communicate with others. As the development of internet, we can communicate with other people convinencly,and find anything we want rather than ask our parents. The internet had a great impact on our life, we waste too much time on the internet rather than communicate with our family. It has changed the way we communicate. Even thought the internet has occupyed our time, it also has some benifits in our life, we can enjoy our life or interesting thing with each other convinently. In my opinion, we should spend more time with our family and our friends rather than communicate with the internet. On the other hand,we can take advantages of it to help our study.
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