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作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文中词汇使用较丰富，高级词汇使用要加强；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
Dear friend, Welcome to China, i am glad to hear that you would like to visit my country. And i am willing to introduce some beautiful places for you. Such as my hometown, it's a good place in my memorize. There are many interesting things. For example, strange caves, bigger trees, beautiful rivers. It's necessary for you to know more about my hometown. I think you should not to miss the Tian He Tan, there is a mystical place, if you are tired, you can take an electrical car, it can make you feel you are flying in the sky, because it's 200 meter from ground to the car. On the other hand, you will see more that you can't see in a low ground. The summer is a good choice to visit here. First, there are many trees to give you a shelter, you will be not burned by the sun, you can by the boat through the river, share the tasty flowers. Above all, the cave is not only colorful but also cool. If you are a student, you only need a half of fee. However, It allows to take photos, if you like anything, you can memorize it by this way. Finally, welcome to here. Sincerly, Your friend, Alice.
