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作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
Dear friend, Welcome to China, i am glad to hear that you would like to visit my country. And i am willing to introduce some beautiful places for you. Such as my hometown, it's a good place in my memorize. There are many interesting things. For example, strange caves, bigger trees, beautiful rivers. It's necessary for you to know more about my hometown. I think you should not miss the Tian He Tan, there is a mystical place, if you are tired, you can take an electrical car, it can make you feel you are flying in the sky, because it's 200 meter from ground to the car. On the other hand, you will see more that you can't see in a low ground. The summer is a good choice to visit here. First, there are many trees to give you a shelter, you will be not burned by the sun, you can by boat through the river and share the tasty flowers. Above all, the cave is not only colorful but also cool. If you are a student, you only need fifty per cent discount. However, it allows to take photos, if you like anything, you can memorize it by this way. Finally, welcome to here. Sincerly, Your friend, Alice.
