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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；句式变化多样；能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下。
With the development of the economy,it is becoming fashionable on online shopping.So many people focus on this phenomenon.Parts of think it is advantage for us,because we don't need to go shopping ,which can buy anything you required,however,other people think that it disadvantage for society,when everyone is going to buy everything on online just stay at home,how about the shop? It's mean anything for us,meanwhile,we even needn't communicate with anybody,just facing the computer? In my point of view,i agree to anyone on online shopping,on the one hand,it's really convinience for us,that can be save our most of time when we are busing for our study or work,on the other hand ,so many style show us in online shop,it's better choice for us absolutely once we feel tired so much. So,i agree to on online shopping,and when we are freely,people also can go shopping.
可可英语 - 划词释义
