文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;全文结构较为严谨。
As a proverb saying," it was unwise for you to draw a conclusion what you saw or you heard." It means you cannot rely on the surface of something, you should check it out by yourself and experience as far as you could. As for me, I am a straight person,but one thing change my conceptions. It was a sunny day ,I intend to visit my grandmother.when I cross the street, i saw an elder lying on the floor.At this moment,I think I should help her to stand up.But a passerby told me maybe it is an extortion,because he saw this similar thing on the newspaper last week.Later we all know that elder pass out indeed.I am so desperation for the elder of my suspicion. Through this matter,we can see we should not draw a conclusion through the surface of the matter,it is unwise and undesirable.
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