2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Hi,my best foreign friend,welcome to my hometown on JiLin province jilin city in Chain's eastern.In here,you can not only feel the ealter obvious four season,but also can enjoy the fresh air and blue sky.My hometown is closed to the 'Changbaishan',it's the famous of the tourist attractions in China. In summer you will feel the continuous mountains or the various of the treees and flowers.Above all,you can find the previous 'RenShen' if you have enjoy luckying.Of course,if you coming in winter,there is covered by big snow,so i can skiing with you. In generly,my hometown is a very beautiful landspace. Ok,that's it.Looking forward to your reply.