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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；从句使用量稍显不足。
Hi, my best foreign friend, welcome to my hometown on JiLin province jilin city in China eastern. In here,you can not only feel the four seasons obvious alter, but also can enjoy the fresh air and blue sky. My hometown is closed to the 'Changbaishan', it's the famous of the tourist attractions in China. In summer you will see of the mountains or various of the trees and flowers. Above all, you can find the previous 'RenShen' if you have enjoyed lucky.Of course, if you coming in winter, there is covered by big snow, so I can skiing with you. In generally, my hometown is a very pretty landscape. Ok, that's it. Looking forward to your reply.
