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句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。
Hi, my foreign friend, welcome to my hometown on JiLin province jilin city in China eastern. Here,you can not only feel the four seasons obvious alter, but also can enjoy the fresh atmosphere and blue sky. My hometown is closed to the 'Changbaishan', it's the famous of the tourist attractions in China. In summer you will see of the mountains or various of the trees and flowers. Above all, you can find the previous 'RenShen' if you have enjoyed good luck.Of course, if you coming in winter, there is covered by big snow, so I can ski with you together. In general, my hometown is a pretty landscape. Ok, that's it. Looking forward to your reply.
