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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下；简单句偏多了；层次不够清晰，文中很少使用衔接词。
From: hubin@163.com Date: Dec. 26th, 2008 To: KPOHsales@hobnail.com Subject: To establish business relationships Dear Sir or Madam, I have learnt that a new product 5670 of your company in NEW YORK Exhibition on the date Dec.15th to 22nd.I am very interested.I have considered if you can give us a price list and instruction.Thanks for your cooperation,Wish we will establish business relationship. We are looking forward your early reply. Yours sincerely. hubin
