2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Up to now,more and more customs have been excessive packaged.With the bussiness developed quickly,people spend many time to watch TV,so bussinessman have used this to annuance their goods. In my point,this thing has said that many person choose things not only watch things action,but also see things packag.The second reason is many person has accractived on goods packaging,this can increase goods sall. In honey,I not aggre on this packag,It will give a faust guidence to person to buy goods which they not need things.So,I think we should write down a list what we need to buy when we go to market,not shopping things on it packaging.