2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Up to now, more and more customs have been packaged excessively. With the bussiness developed quickly, people spent many time to watch TV, so bussinessman have used this to announance their goods. In my point, this thing has said that many people chooses things not only watch things action, but also see things package. The second reason is many persons have accractived on goods packaging, this can increase goods sall. In honey,I not agree on this package, it will give a faust guide to person to buy goods which they not need things. So, I think we should write down a list what we need to buy when we go to market, not shopping things on it packaging.