作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
The world is dangerous, so it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. For most people,they would be put all the money in the wallet, so when they lost their wallet, they would be lost all the thing. We should realise it is important for us that divide some eggs into more basket. It just likes you must finish something, you make a plan, it might be the best, but you should also make a plan B. It is possible that something else appeared, at last, you used the plan B, and gave up the best plan. It is example for us that divided some eggs into more basket.