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With the development of the economy,it is becoming more and more fashionable in online shopping.So many people focus on this phenomenon.Parts of think it is advantage for us,because we don't need to go shopping,which can buy anything you required,however,other people think that it disadvantage for society,when everyone is going to buy everything online just stay at home,how about the shop?It's anything meaning for us,meanwhile,we even needn't communicate with anybody,just facing the computer? In my point of view,I agree to anyone on online shopping,on the one hand,it's really convenience for us,that can be saving our most of time when we are busing of study or work,on the other hand,so many style show us in online shop,it's better choice for us absolutely once we feel tired so much. So,I agree to on online shopping,and when we are freely,people also can go shopping.
