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Will E-books Replace Traditional Books? Nowadays, with the development of technology, E-books has become more and more popular because it is almost free and you can get what you want to read conveniently. However, some of people take an opinion that E-books will replace traditional books and the reason is following. For one hand, people are not willing to buy a book from a book store. Instead, they prefer to search it online which will cost them less money and time without going outdoor. And then, book store may be stuck with trouble and finally close up which will give rise to a negative effect on the development of traditional books. For another hand, traditional books are not easily kept in our room. It may lose or damage in which we are not excepted while the e-book can be saved into our computers or cell-phones to make sure it can be found easily. Whereas, in my opinion, traditional books should not be replaced cause e-books may do harm to our health and hurts our eyes badly. And what's more, it is difficult to focus on the content of e-books which will make it less effective. Thus, we should do something to protect traditional books, and only in this way can we have a meaningful life!