2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；可适当增加从句的使用；词汇表达不够丰富，要增加学术词汇的使用；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Creating a Green Campus In recent years,Creating a green campus is becoming more and more important and urgent as a result of the bad situation,such as violence,leaving litter everywhere and so on. The green campus we want to create is not only the green situation but also the green culture.The green situation cannot decide whether we can create the green compus,but the green culture can decide what the green compus is and how the green compus is. As far as I am concerned,to create the green campus,on the one hand,we should advocate students keeping compus clear together.On the other hand, the school should offer a safe and clean situation for students to study in the daily life! In this way,I believe our school will become more and more beautiful!