小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.His name is Jim.He is eleven years old.And he has a big head,a small mouth two big and black eyes and two big ears.He can speak English well.But my English is not good.He often helps me with my English.I like playing with him.I am glad to be his friend.