小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.His name is Jim.He is eleven years old.And he has a big head,a small mouth two big and black eyes and two big ears.He can speak English well,but my English is not good.So he often helps me with my English.So I like playing with him.I am glad to be his friend.