单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
I have a good acquaintance. His name is Jim. He is eleven year old. And he has a big head, a small mouth, two big and black eyes and two big ears. He can speak English well, but my English is not good. So he often helps me with my English. So I like playing with him. I am glad to be his pal.