正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;文章组织结构良好。
There are many clocks in the Brown's house. They are in different rooms.A big clock stands in a corner of the sitting room. It is a very, very old clock, but it still keeps good time. Mr. Brown winds it once a week.Time is money. Mr. Brown and his family all value time。