高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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l ike my hometown used to be ,it was very beautiful,there are many trees in the mountain and the water in the river is very clean,the air is very fresh.but now ,it is different ,the trees were cut down,intead of many high buildings appear there,and the water became muddy.it is rarely to see the fishes in the water,the air is not fresh any more.i miss my hometown used to be.