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DEAR BEN I am very gald that you you can come to my hometown this summer. My hometown is HUICHENG which is a very beautiful city with a long his history . During the long history of china ,many of refine scholar fall in love with the city and has writen many famous versus .If you come to my hometown i will show the peace park to you .the peace park was set up by the work people in order to in momery the great leader sunyunsun in last century .It is very helpful to visit the park for you study the chinese cultural .Every day,the park is full with people .In the morning ,the elders are doing exercise .In the afternoon ,some of teenages are like to organize various activities in the park ,so the park is full with joyful. after have dinger,we can not only go for a walk in the park but also can appreciate various peformes .what's more ,It is very enjoy when we go for a ride in the park I hope you like my hometown.
