2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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DEAR BEN I am very glad that you can come to my hometown this summer. My hometown is HUICHENG which is a very beautiful city with a long history .During the long history of China ,many of scholars fall in love with the city and have written many famous versus .If you come to my hometown i will show the peace park to you .the peace park was set up by the work people in order to memory the great leader sunzhongshan in the last century .It is very helpful to visit the park for you study the chinese culture .Every day,the park is full of people .In the morning ,the elders are doing exercise .In the afternoon ,some of teenagers are like to organize various activities in the park ,so the park is full with joyful. After supper,we can not only go for a walk in the park but also can appreciate various peformance .What more ,It is much enjoyful when we go for a ride in the park I hope you like my hometown.