小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. He is a very handsome person. He has little hair, maybe has little bald. He has two big black eyes and a red mouth. Her voice is good. I like his voice very much. He likes singing and play games. All of those skills are very good. He is a kind person. He often help me. I like him very much. I alway regard him as my lifelong friend.