教育部——the Ministry of Education
文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;句式变化多样;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。
As we all knows ,healthy is the basics of life so if we could excercise an hours everyday we will have a better body condition to work and study well.The Ministry of Education also adivice yuang people expercialy the students better to exercise an hour everyday and also put forward national student sports program,the slogan of the plan is: everyday exercise an hour, health work fifty years, a happy life for a lifetime. Expercialy the seniors three students ,they will facing the univercity entrance exam and need to go over everyday but no times to exercise.But in my opinions I think even though the senior three students they are also need exercise but very need have it, one hand exercise can help we have a clear mind so that we will study well ,on the other hand exercise can cultivite our outgoing personality ,it well have a good effect for our future.